Anonymous at Wed, 31 Jul 2024 17:33:05 UTC No. 991165

*this

Anonymous at Wed, 31 Jul 2024 19:54:17 UTC No. 991176

I like the lighting and color grading. The jump cut is a little nauseating

Anonymous at Wed, 31 Jul 2024 21:38:53 UTC No. 991194

>>991164
You might want to fix up your light, the main focus should be the face and it's barely recognizable

Anonymous at Wed, 31 Jul 2024 21:57:58 UTC No. 991197

>>991164
That actually looks cool man. I would love to see more. It has a clay/toy/stop motion vibe to it (if that makes sense)

Anonymous at Wed, 31 Jul 2024 22:51:23 UTC No. 991200

>>991164
Everything in SFX is bad, rain isn’t hitting the armor. Face is not wet, including the hair. Fire and Water do not mix, WTF were you thinking. Land is dry, you didn’t even put some reflective material.

If this was something to do with fire magic. I say you failed to lead the audience to believe it because all the scenes looked like it was a rain. Fire magic is not noticeable. Ashes don’t drop like rain. Armor is sparking, it shouldn’t do that.

You need to redo your entire SFX, this is a F in school.

Anonymous at Wed, 31 Jul 2024 23:07:28 UTC No. 991204

>>991164
Is he supposed to look like a plastic action figure?

Anonymous at Fri, 23 Aug 2024 02:26:47 UTC No. 992646

>>991164
is that from that shitty new rts? doesn't matter how good the animation is, nothing can save that slop

Anonymous at Fri, 23 Aug 2024 19:41:21 UTC No. 992664

>>991197
It's from a AAA RTS game the comes out in 2024/2025

Anonymous at Fri, 23 Aug 2024 19:42:23 UTC No. 992666

>>991204
no.

Anonymous at Fri, 23 Aug 2024 21:39:24 UTC No. 992669

>>992666
There's no way.
They had to be going for a stop motion with figures look, and not realism. Shit looks like a gritty/edgy Rankin & Bass animation.

Anonymous at Fri, 23 Aug 2024 21:56:20 UTC No. 992672

>>992669
https://store.steampowered.com/app/2012510/Stormgate/

Anonymous at Fri, 23 Aug 2024 23:18:54 UTC No. 992676

>>991164
this looks like mdotstrange made it but in a bad way

Anonymous at Sat, 24 Aug 2024 07:07:47 UTC No. 992691

>>992672
>RTS
Alright that's kinda fair. I don't expect high character detail on overhead games like this.
Also, the intro cinematic on that page looks pretty fine to me. It doesn't look anything like the OP. Looks like standard-fare shit. I'm not a fan of the "chewy" overwatch-esque look, but it seems like it's similar enough to the rest of the games that use the style.

I tried looking through the other videos on the page there and couldn't find OP's though. Though OP clip looks like it's straight from "the game" (if it is the same one), so I don't know.
I did see one fugly looking clip, but it seemed clearly like some pre-vis shit since they were showing it alongside concept art and stuff.